~disorientation

26 Responses

  1. banjolyn says:

    i love love LOVE this piece, lori!

  2. Rpoett says:

    This is OUTSTANDING! Lori you have struck a nerve.

  3. Dave Kavanagh says:

    Gosh, Lori. This is wonderful work, I enjoyed the way it drew me down….down the page to a wonderful ending. I have added this piece to Editor’s Daily Picks’

  4. Sofia Kioroglou says:

    Nice piece, Lori!

  5. Luiz Canha Machado says:

    This is a superior writing! Love the pace and the way it unfolds.
    “Because I will
    write you seven
    years in a language 
    of stolen phrases
    & forget-me-nots” – outstanding.

    • Lori Hamilton says:

      thank you very much for this awesome comment, luiz! it is greatly appreciated. i’m looking forward to reading much more from you, as well!

  6. Naomi Tate Maghen says:

    This is spilling over with emotion in such a wonderful array of images. Beautiful write Lori!

  7. Mario Vitale says:

    a mere reflection of one’s soul

  8. ChrisTabaka says:

    This is so wonderful!

  9. Mario Vitale says:

    really good piece keep them coming

  10. Sofia Kioroglou says:

    Stellar work, Lori!

  11. Mario Vitale says:

    Very nice Lori keep it coming now

  12. Victoria Donnelly says:

    Wow, powerful work, written so very well.

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