for the one whose final words left litter in my veins

banjolyn

i will die a metaphor.

11 Responses

  1. Alfred Booth says:

    Your exquisite title pulled me here. A lot of interesting things going on in this poem.

  2. Dave Kavanagh says:

    This new style suits you, Mandee. I enjoyed this trip my friend.

  3. Dave Kavanagh says:

    I would really like you to submit this, along with any other work you think suitable for the magazine which launches on the 12th of June. The submission form is here http://magazine.thebluenib.com/submission-form/ I am sure our editor will simply love this, I know I do 🙂

  4. selfrisinmojo says:

    Excellent work my friend

  5. Naomi says:

    Your Banjoesque title drew me straight in without seeing that this was you – should have known! Love this write, a little more rooted with detailed descriptions, equally creative and compelling

  6. Sofia Kioroglou says:

    Nicely written poem! Thank you for sharing!

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